Poetry from high school or so

[joshwriting]

I stare out over the empty field
And think as I am wont to do
Of children playing, not in school
And kites flying ever through the air

My heart soars with delight and fun
I long to run and play with them
And then it falls right down again,
It is over an empty field I stare.

Comments

[ladyhoshi.livejournal.com]

i didnt know u wrote
even if it was a long time ago
*wonderfully surprised*

[eveninghawk.livejournal.com]

This comes closer to vocalizing how I've been feeling of late than any set of words I've managed to come up with!

Thanks for sharing. *hugs*

[erowen.livejournal.com]

This is sad - more just depressed than sad. I can see myself doing this during math class. It's clear and conveys a sense of intelligence. I like it quite a bit, actually.